:24 - still not crazy about how he loses the puzzle piece.. not very believable that someone would drop a piece that way... I still think having him bang his hand on table as he's coughing would be the easiest way to do so.
:35 - he takes far too long to put the puzzle piece into place. The animation is too slow. He can linger trying to determine where it should be, but when he decides where to put it, the action should not take more than about 8 - 10 frames to execute.
:39 - when he taps the piece into place, you should move more than just his wrist, there would be some counter movement in his arm as well.
:37 - need an antic with his right arm before it reaches into bowl to grab a pretzel. his arm seems to pause for a bit while moving towards his mouth.
:45 - puzzle piece floats in his fingers
1:08 - looks like there is an extra puzzle piece lying around.
David -
ReplyDelete:24 - still not crazy about how he loses the puzzle piece.. not very believable that someone would drop a piece that way... I still think having him bang his hand on table as he's coughing would be the easiest way to do so.
:35 - he takes far too long to put the puzzle piece into place. The animation is too slow. He can linger trying to determine where it should be, but when he decides where to put it, the action should not take more than about 8 - 10 frames to execute.
:39 - when he taps the piece into place, you should move more than just his wrist, there would be some counter movement in his arm as well.
:37 - need an antic with his right arm before it reaches into bowl to grab a pretzel.
his arm seems to pause for a bit while moving towards his mouth.
:45 - puzzle piece floats in his fingers
1:08 - looks like there is an extra puzzle piece lying around.
I think that it is amazing!
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